To go back to that last day
Before heartache swept me away
No matter if, she was sleeping sound
Pick her up and bounce her around
Instead, I just patted her tummy
Sent her home with her mommy
Never guessing she would die
Now these bitter tears I cry
5/2/08
This is about the last time I saw
Chloe alive. I have so many regrets.
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Again Cathy my heart aches for you and your family in the passing of Chloe. I admire all the poetic tributes to keep her spirit alive. May God continue to bless you my friend. Patpowers
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My Heart Just Aches
Oh just keep writing. It does seem to help to get it out a bit, I said only a bit. It's nice to get the support here on AP though. Everyone is so sensitively nice when you loose a loved one. Oh this poem is precious and know you didn't know. You know neither did I. Oh how I wished I would have just loved on him more that last day. Oh Davische you are in my prayers and your family. She is so preciously cute.
Much Love
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Congratulations on winning the Gold. Sorry it was under such sad circumstances. I believe little Chloe was and is loved in memory by all of AP...Katie
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That is such a gorgeous picture. She has really been the main source for most of your inspiration lately. Your pieces are always so amazing... and she really adds to the depth and beauty of them. Well done darling. Good luck.
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very painful incident, worded just to touch our hearts.
All the best in my contes -
Like they said below, she know you love her. Love yah cathy, Beautiful write.
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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she knows you love her and she always will cause shes in your heart forever and happy in heaven with God
i love you
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