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Slumber

Floating through
      a sea of dreams
        dimensions of reality
             my fantasies fulfilled
                      as I sleep

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painted by ~ Victoria Frances

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  • marlene47 silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    Nice connection between dreams and other reality. Well done.
    Marlene


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 3, 2008
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    Very clever ~ seeing this as though in a dream... x


  • aboomer silver member
    May 2, 2008
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    What lovely words! This is beautiful! Love all of your lines!
    best wishes in your contest.