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Verbless

clean dishes, raisin fingers,
long list of chores on table.
hidden eye and thin rod:
motivation.
towel in left, glass in right,
shards everywhere.
breath on neck, hair in fist,
heat of anger on his cheeks.
hand against face,
face against wall,
body on floor.

miles of road, many houses.
smiles.

phone call on Valentine’s evening;
dessert at Applebee’s.
chocolate:  a solution to every problem.
tears, apologies, forgiveness.
new beginnings.
too late?
never.

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  • Cesarean
    May 3, 2008

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    wow, this is great! I mean insofar as abuse like that can be great...but the title and the poem itself, its just fantastic and the emotion is evident. this was a great read, thanks!