I laugh,
I cry.
I live,
I die.
I scream,
I dream.
I hope,
I lie.
Now I ask,
Why?
A contest entry
- Contest of the Shorts! by Shahrazad.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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haha- simple and to the point.... something I think everyone asks themselves.... I like that you admit you lie.... that was my favorite part actually- it got down to the dirty core of being human better than some of the other words did.
I think if you focused on more of those "dirty cores" of humanity it would make this poem more original (as I see was one person's critisism.
Thanks for the read! -
A simple little ditty. Too cliche though.
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