How can I believe
this friendship is eternal
when I lie here crying
with these words in my journal?
I used to believe
so much of your lies
while hiding the girl within
who always cries.
While I lie here bleeding
my crushed hopes and doubt,
I look back on when we would laugh
and believed that was what is was all about.
After all this time
I knew deep within my heart
that I never trusted you
but alone I played no part.
So now I feel doubt
whenever I see someones eyes
I could never trust
not after all your lies
A contest entry
- Doubt by azure85.
600 points, ended May 3, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Oh, the doubt will always remain, a good poem based on the prompt. Thank you so much!
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