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It's Too Late...



'Sorry won't work
You had me by a
string, until the
fire turned blue...




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14 words...

A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    May 3

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: It's Too Late...
    Oh My~ I could have sworn I left a message here
    but for some reason it is not showing

    Now I Counted...and it looks like
    You have 14 words and not 15~ Gasp!!
    I'm sorry~
    Beautiful piece You brought forward yet
    I have to follow the own rules I set which
    was 15words only I imagine You would
    understand but I do Love the piece You have penned
    I've done it before where I missed a word
    in a contest such as this~
    Powerful images~
    You took the lyrics line and brought Heat..~
    Magnificent take on the prompt~

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~