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boring, miss. so boring.

 

 

wanna help you                                                                                             you help wanna
wanna help you                                                                                             you help wanna
help you                                                                                                                  you help
help you                                                                                                                  you help
you                                              are testing my patience                                               you
you                                                         little one                                                          you
you                                              with the watercolor eyes                                             you
y                                                                                                                                       y
y                                                                                                                                       y
.                                                                                                                                        .
.                                                                                                                                        .
.                                                                                                                                        .
i read the news today.

seems there is a

slight

overcast.

 

the sky is beautiful

because it is.

not exciting

or hilarious

but solemn and admirable

 

you could write about

anyone else.

fill volumes

of useless shit

do that, won't you.

 

i won't apologize

but the drawings are nice.

 

 

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i am a fool who writes about things she can't do or say.

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  • Annexed Josephine
    May 2, 2008

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    i forgot that stuff was in there and i regretted showing it to you. i'm sorry you saw that.

    besides that.

    the structure of this poem is really amazing.

    again. i'm sorry about today in class. really. sometimes i don't think. obviously.