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The Edge of the World






They batter me through
  and through
      and through:
  the fighting that I held strong with
along the edges of the world

In the places where we wither
  in spaces I once loved to be
where I was with you, and you with them
    alone, with you with me

  But no matter how long I try
your mouth won't open to catch the stars
  that I spill from my lips
      trying to bring life to yours

From the edges of the world
    where you run from me
  and I run after you
      to pull you into a thousand things
  and show you how to breathe




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I catch the world's edge, and pull you over it, my love. Because here, in this place, is where we are meant to be.


-Thefallout


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  • Friday gold member
    May 10, 2008

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    While I think this would make a wonderful song, it is far over the word limit. Thank you for writing for me anyway