Smack me, bitch!
Hit me, whore!
I'm already dead.
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Purple Orgasm
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A contest entry
- 9 Word Purple Orgasm by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
750 points, ended May 4, 2008, 29 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I agree with harmony
Wtf? nice, but wtf? -
This is stunning. Dark and edgy and full of impact. This is well deserved gold -- for such a short poem, it has a lingering effect. Excellent. This is a classic -- wish I had written it.
Garrison
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Wow.........holy.....wow
Mylee -
WOW, I CAN SEE WHY YOU WON A GOLD. THIS IS REALLY FUNNY
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whew! have you been viewing my work
i most certainly thirst such control in the bedroom i love power its like lightning fire works i simply love it
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Perfect!!!
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Um,
Wow.
LOL.
Brutal.
Good luck.
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Well then!!!
What this about??
Harmony -
whoops! meant to wish you luck as well!
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Whoa!.........Whoa!haha
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