The beauty of night surrounds us
as we listen to the quiet
All that is heard is our breathing
There are no words that we could say
right now that would fit this moment
We are a language all our own
that only we can interpret
If you wish for me to sing the lines
of my own soul’s song,
make your request
On a night like this, when nothing is stirring
I will not fear to drape them fully
across the sky
A contest entry
- Sing to me, the song of your soul by Sanguinarius.
600 points, ended May 9, 23 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful imagery..I like the last 2 stanzas a lot...excellent!
Congrats on the HM!
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You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself. So calm and soothing to read. Made me feel as if I was floating on those words. In the silence of night, we hear what is important. ~ Joyce
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Stunning ! This seems to flow like a dream ~Bret
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Beautiful passion and seduction at its best...you hold this reader and pull a sigh and then I read it again
winner wrote all over it
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whooo hooo what a poem, what a great long sultry sigh.... you temptress you.
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This is a song from your soul. and the words are wonderfully soft yet strong in heatfelt emotions..You have a beautiful talent....
novy
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Oh my but how BEAUTIFUL this is, sweetie
This just made my heart smile as I feel the same for my wonderful someone
"There are no words that we could say
right now that would fit this moment
We are a language all our own
that only we can interpret"
My favorite lines from your beautiful piece
Wishing you health, love, happiness, and joy and continued success in all you do
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Your words so subtle yet so passionate and sweet!
's Such a tender and touchng write! 's
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excellent
this is stunning.everything flows so well.we are a language all our own;how good are these lines. love it.
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Wow...simply breathtaking! Love the last stanza! " I will not fear to drape them fully across the sky"...so revealing love at in its raw form. And secure in their needs! ~Sie
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wow
I can hear that song! it's sings of untold wonders
where all sadness is put asunder... I LOVE THIS!!
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