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[ "lick this kiss" ]

"lick this kiss"
my electric lips
and tongue whisssper.

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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Ooh, yummy indeed. This was probably the shortest poem I've ever read, but you still manage to make it good. I liked how you drew out the s in whisper. Congrats on the shiny, too
    Jeanette*~

  • Suzanne Dia
    May 1, 2008
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    ....nice. yummy, i think.


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    May 1, 2008

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    wow! this wa snice ooooooooh yeeeeeeeeeeeah i think you did a very great job she good luck we have a long time to wait on othere people crap!