Your warm breath,
Casting a spell,
Against my skin.
Author notes
Purple Orgasm
A contest entry
- 9 Word Purple Orgasm by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
750 points, ended May 4, 2008, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww gorgeous. Congratulations on the trophy. x
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wow! some short pieces can really be amazing, just like this
nice job...xxx
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Thank you very much
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Excellent in brevity and metaphor...strong and beautiful...well done!
Congrat's on the trophy...
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beautiful. straight up to the point. i love it. you captured so much in just 9 words.
-bella
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I see you've attracted arafura to your page. He's a wonderful writer and a valuable asset when it comes to your own writing. =]
Very short, very subtle, but very sensual. There is an entire world of romance and eroticism behind this, and you have shadowed and silhouetted it flawlessly.
Wonderfully done.
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Yes I know he is, and I've thanked him on numerous occasions for his words of wisdom and help...and thank you for your comment as well.
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Brilliant 9 words! All of them.
Good luck in the contest.
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Very well written. A world of meaning contained within three short lines! Good luck in the contest!
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wow very short and meaningful
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Wow this is a good write. It sent shivers up my spine. You're a great writer keep it up.
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casting a spell against my skin...ooo this gave me shivers! very well done with this! I hope you win gold for it. you most definitely deserve it!
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Thank you very much, you comment was well appreciated.
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this is sexy
i like this i think you have definately did a nice job with your 9 words i love this
thanks for comming to have a O G with me
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