What lies beneath the ocean blue?
Dolphins, Mermaids, and creatures..It's true!
They sway like the breezes of the Hawaiian shore,
Like gliding hawks and colourful parrots they soar.
"But why has the rum gone?" Captain Jack exclaimed,
While Captain Morgan was the pirate to blame.
"I did not drink but a drop of your booze,
You can tell by no vomit on my shoes."
Now, under clear blue waters is where it began,
Nemo and Dory happily holding hands.
Jaws is pacing back and forth in a panic,
While Jack and Rose reunite on the Titanic.
Crush the Turtle is giving free rides,
On the crystal currents that has huge tides.
And Cody is at the Penguin World Surfing Championship,
Where he goes on the most greatest trip.
Patrick the Star lives under a rock,
He prefers to sleep, rather than talk.
Chicken Joe is always high,
He thinks he lives way up in the sky.
Jacques is the bi-lingual crab of the sea,
He lives in a treasure chest below a palm tree.
The Pirates of the Caribbean are all so confused,
While the critters of the sea are very amused.
So what lies beneath the ocean blue?
Well, secrets are not meant to be shared with you.
Author notes
Option 3! Something funny!
Option 3! THE MOVIES! Choose a funny/fave actor to inspire you!
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This poem is a "parody" of some ocean type movies. I decided to put them together and create my own version of a poem parody. Although it may not be quite humorous, I mixed it up for the younger children on AP. So I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did.
A contest entry
- Under The Sea by Starz of Heaven.
475 points, ended June 5, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
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What Do You Think?
Comments
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Interesting write, a great job mixing up the tales, and achiving a rhyme without it being forced!! Good job, thank you for entering my contest!
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i've read this before in another one of my contest. Still love it!
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urgh they all sound the same don't they... they should come up with some new words and new rhymes, to keep up with the times!
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Very creative! thanks for the entry.
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haha very cute...who would have thought to make such an original sum-up of all the underwater movies! Very nice, good flow, and definitely funny. Thanks for entering!
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This is STILL my favourite poem of yours...
Who lives in a pineapple under the sea??
SPONGEBOB SPARROW PANTS .... aaaaaaaaaahhhhahahahhaha -
Fun and well done
Thank you for sharing this magical piece with us. I am happy you entered the contest and you made me smile.
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Enjoyable & fun!!!
A great homage to all those sea faring critters of fictional seascapes & movies...
Great rhyme, rhythm & flow...
Another great write you have here...
Well done!!!
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I think that you have done an amazing job with this piece thank you for bringing it to my contest have a great week
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hey jacks i must say this was a pretty darn good diggity poem lol. i like the ideas of ocean movies, it's cute.. my fav. one is the surf's up part and of course my hunny Jack Sparrow's most famous line
"but why is the rum gone?"
LOVED these lines the most this was halarious
""I did not drink but a drop of your booze,
You can tell by no vomit on my shoes."
Brilliant poem little one
Much frog love
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I really like your poem it is very good I think you will do a good job in the contest have a nice night
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