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line 16[ The sun on the horizon ]

The sun on the horizon

slowly tiptoes across the meadows

and begins it's rise upon the day

to set hearts a light and dreams free

solitary moments being captured

under the brightness of a freshness anew

tiny rainbows spill light from left-over dew.

Tiny, little water pixies laugh as they bathe

in psychedelic kaleidoscope pools refracting

Many rays of sunlight into a beautiful prismatic rainbow

A lover sighs deep to diffuse in the hue-full ribbon

a vision of refracted dreams, desires.

The pride and prowess of all the god's empire

Within grasp of the eager, adventuring heart

Capturing the joy of yesterday's sorrow

Always waiting and yearning for the dawn of tomorrow.

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Always waiting and yearning for the dawn of tomorrow.

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  • penman gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Congratulations on the honorable mention.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 1, 2008

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    how true this one is...always waiting...good luck to you and thanks for the entry