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Certain Pleasuring (Erotic Side Challenge)

Awaken in the dead of night,
all is calm the moon is bright.
On the streets the moon does shine,
nicely upon this bed of mine!

All alone,
he isn't home.
Raising the phone
there is no dial tone
I’m left to finger my own.
Across my breast, fingers roam,
nipples have greatly grown.
Slightly twisting, I start to moan.
Flicking, pinching, pain is shown,
a gentle lick then wind is blown.
Harder then ever known,
nipples now a solid stone.

Eyes closed I focus on him
all the while, I burn within.
Passion consumes my peace
as I caress and then release.

Hold my breath
hand mislead
Passion now fills my head.
Missing him in my bed
nipples now erotically red
due to pressure fed.
On the floor I am spread
ready to shed
heats thread…

Nipples nice and taut
urges tempted then fought
within my mind I am caught
by erect and alertness that is brought
by my hands I’m at fault
for certain pleasuring has been sought.

Author notes

Erotic Challenge Side Fun

DLC-Jem Was to assign three poets pics of her own making and I was chosen..here is the link where you can find the pictures and poets she had challenged to write for her art.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4093367

I only wish write to do it justice..Great Artwork DLC.

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 16

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    I just went to the pictures and I do believe you did them all justice. Your words and descriptions are pure and vigorating sensually. You certainly do know how to pleasure and never lose that touch (pun intended).

    Ted E

  • mcfreeman
    June 10
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    Tingle

    and tantalizing. Enjoy your erotic writes.


  • Galaxy2
    June 9

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    The dead of the night...
    in the moonlight I can see two dazzling moons of yours
    while you lie in your natural shape on your lucky bed

    you're home alone
    so you make the most of it
    by using your pretty fingers in an artistic way

    your fingers start roaming across your your breasts
    touching, rubbing and teasing the pink cherries of yours
    you twist slightly
    and begin moaning sweetly
    ...as sweet as a Shakespearean sonnet
    or a Keatsonian lyric...
    you flick
    you pinch
    first gently...like a breeze...
    then hard...like a wind
    you become harder and harder with the sweet cherries
    till they grow as solid as a stone...
    What a sight to see!
    How amazing!
    How lustful!

    You burn within
    the fire is not less than a wild forest fire
    passion consumes your peace
    and you caress yourself skillfully
    and then releasy beautifully

    The hand action is going on
    you hold your breath
    and continue the creative activity
    your sweet pink nipples are now erotically red due to the pressure applied by you
    You spread your sexy legs while lying on the floor...naked...

    Oh my...the NIPPLES!
    the pink-red nipples...
    the..hard...erect...taut nipples
    What an exotic view!
    Never seen before!
    Never enjoyed the sight of a voluptous hot girl before!
    Oh my...it's much too much for me!
    I cannot resist it....

    Kissing...caressing...rubbing...licking...sucking..you name it, my sweetest love!

    Galaxy2




    • Alright girl you turned the heat up didnt you????

      Yummy grat job and thanks so much for...the comment...the turn on..your awesome

      love
      Passions
  • Yes indeed Tory, this was one grade A piece.
    Absolutely wonderful.

    Love ya girl

    Candace
  • *peeks a little through eyes*
    whoa momma that was.....um.....steamy.
    awesomeness

    lubb
    Tasha

  • Excellent Write!

    You are such a little weaver yourself ya know.
    You can really get things fired up here at AP!
    You go girl, and congrates on the new form. Bravo!

    Much love, Timothy aka Servant of Shadows.

  • Brilliant!!!

    Superb poem for a Jem painting. You remain th eabsolute Queen of erotica on AP. Wonderful stuff.


  • DLC-Jem gold member
    May 2

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    Silly tart I am, you have me crying as you have done this soooooo bloody beautifully, I knew you would do the painting justice. Thank you Tory xxxxxx


  • Griswold
    May 1

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    very nicely done in monorhyme stanzas baby. An excellent piece for the challenge. Good luck sweetheart. Love you...Scott

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