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Loss of Friendship=Broken Heart

He was my friend for over seven years
Seven long wonderful years

Just last summer I found I liked him a lot more
I thought he liked me more too

His actions showed me he cared
His words fed my soul

It didn't last
Not at all

A week ago, we all played a prank on him
Just to be funny

We put pinecones in his bag
Just to raise a laugh

When he found them, he yelled and screamed
And then he flipped me off

He walked away with me still staring
My heart broken in two

Yesterday I wrote a note to him
Begging him to forgive me

He sent one back
And told me that he never would

I cried during classes
And let loss wash over me

I still don't know if he ever loved me
Any time at all

I regret every part of that prank we pulled
I lost my best friend, and I gained a broken heart

Author notes

My name is Shannon Green, and a few days ago, my friend flipped me off, and it ruined our friendship. He hates me, and I am still really sad about it.

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  • GypsyEyes
    May 31, 2008
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    ok honey...your friend is a jerk! if he cant take a simple joke then you need better friends! because this one is WAY to sensitive! great poem! i do hope he gets over himself and forgives you for something that wasnt even that big of a deal! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! CarnalNineTailedFox