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Dusk

Day melts into night
A scented breeze, so sweet
Light not yet gone
Darkness hastening to arrive
A beautiful painting
Water tinted pink, purple, blue
Sun a ball of fire
Light meshing with dark
Opposites combined
Creating colors, ever beautiful
One moment in time, as time seems to freeze
The openness of day awaits the mysteries of night
Dusk

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a poem i found from a while back. i hope you like it

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  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Imagery that paints a lovely end to the day!!! A blessed sigh of peace comes over me as I adore the sunset so very much! Very pretty!

    Az


  • BlissfullyIgnorant
    May 3, 2008

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    whoa.... this is really great
    theres alot of description
    who knew that someone could describe the simple topic of dusk?
    well anyways its a great poem


  • psycospazz
    May 2, 2008
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    amazing


  • Rianna Bear
    May 1, 2008

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    never heard someone write about the unison of the dusk like this!! this was very creative in its style and wording! i loved the meshing of night and day visions that i got when reading this. good job and keep up the good work!


    rianna