I'd tear my skin off
if I thought there was something
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Author notes
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A contest entry
- Quickie Prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 1, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything-prewrites allowed-2nd contest by Midgetbridgey.
350 points, ended July 11, 2008, 245 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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so little words but such a power to it!
congrats on being a finalist! -
I will comment when the contest is finished
Best of Lucky
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well well
love the original structure, love the depth is such a few words. great write that perfectly encapsulates the way you feel. you're obviously extremely imaginative - well done -
a good poem, ah but the spirit within would escape then and fly away into the swirling mass of the universe.
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well done great write...got win written all over it..
Simon
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well done with dark yet deep passion in a wondering soul. many blessings always xx just an FYI the black writing was a wee hard to read against the dark background but well written with emotion in its brevity. x
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wow, how deeply vivid and dark, so much depth here and emotion. Loved it!... x
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