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The Tapestry

Created like a tapestry, ropes

of distrust strangle hearts.

Telling a story with each

thread of the moons silken years.

 

 

Designs of reds and sunsets,

blues and daffodils interwoven,

by time and flight of essence.

 

A magic carpet of dissension,

working its spell of creativity

and abandoned insecurity's

through moments of self.

 

Emerging a piece of place where

auras meet and a new day will dawn.

 

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  • PageTurner
    May 3, 2008

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    Weaving your magic with pen in hand
    'Tis Grand, my Friend...



    "A magic carpet of dissension,
    working its spell of creativity
    and abandoned insecurity's
    through moments of self."



    Soul Soothing, Scribe.

    ~ Nicky♥


  • Puppydog gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    JUST BEAUTIFUL!!!

    Each and every day weaves together to bring about our life. Hopefully a better and happier one.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 2, 2008

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    "...Emerging a piece of place where
    auras meet and a new day will dawn."

    What a perfect illusion,
    a comforting conclusion.

    A true wonder to again see
    your words upon the page.

    Aesthete


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    such vivid imagery

    my friend the mistress of the pen! nice work lady!
    got a feeling this is a winner! good luck!