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See His Glory!

I woke up this morning
as the sun began to shine
I took a stroll in heaven
where flowers bloom divine

I saw colors of the rainbow
like purple orange and blue
with yellows flowing like rivers
along mountains and valleys
sprinkled with dew

The skies smiled in lavender
which took my breath away
Imagine being in paradise
even if it were just for a day

I leaped in jubilant wonder
at the majesty of it all
As my heart sang sweet melodies
that echoed off heavens wall

Oh sing angelic choir
and hail the beauty of the Lord
His hand has created such magnificence
for which He cannot be ignored

The earth is His cathedral
where the radiance of His spirit
is beheld on a canvas of perfection

To which the nations praise Him
in honor and glory of His life
death and resurrection



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  • Kelli Marie
    May 3, 2008

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    If there is something this beauitful here on earth, can you imagine what He has awaiting us in Heaven. A very well written piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing.
    Kelli


  • ennovy silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    AMEN, Amen. amen

    Just beautiful words about the wonderment of our safe heaven. You put them together perfectly showing your piety. Very heathwarming read...write ON!...novy


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    Beauty, beauty, beauty!

    Goodness, your beauty is really piercing through!
    well written, and cleverly done...for what color font
    can you find those illuminate the minds with heaven!
    well done sister poetess, well done!
    Applause! Applause! Applause!
    ears/Seattle


  • movedon
    May 1, 2008

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    A lovely poem! Kind of hard to read with the backround color scheme with the letters, but a fine write. Really captures God in his perfection. I enjoyed the read

    Love always,
    Miley


  • CountryCousin
    May 1, 2008

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    Excellent.

    This piece is so timely for me right now because this morning my patient indeed went on up to heaven. I can well image that she is now seeing what you have described in this poem. Lovely and it truly lifts my spirits.


  • Elle Kaye
    May 1, 2008

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    Ooh i really like this, such beautiful words and even better imagrey, All in all a fantastic poem, thanks so much for posting it.


  • Uniquely-Scarred
    May 1, 2008

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    the rhymn in this is great, it slows down a few times though, but i liked it a lot, verry beautiful, and worded from the very root of your faith in god, best of luck in the contest

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