I see the devils deadly fire consuming your eyes, running black as night.
Your voice stirs the whispered hunger within me, my desire.
Words cannot describe the things that I yearn for you to bestow onto me.
I want you to pin me to your bed of blood red velvet and split my pale shell of a body wide open.
I want you to make me beg to acquire the permission to speak your name.
I want you to take everything I am and swallow it whole, never give it back, to leave me empty inside.
I want you to throw me agianst the wall and not allow me to ever disobey words spoken from those pale reaper like lips.
If I try to run, hunt me down and punish me with you pleasure consuming tourchures.
Wrape your arms around me and force me to lie still.
Command me to see everything your way, remove my very will, and keep me forever.
Make me your slave.............
I beg of you, don't hold back any longer, I cannot bear this knawing, unfullfilled need.
Controll me, rule me, yield me,do with me as you wish.
So long as I can feel your touch set my cold flesh ablaze.
So long as your blood lust consumes me and threatens to entrall me for the remainder of eturnity.
I want your eyes to draw in my body like the blood that pours from your lips.
I hunger......Feed me, Master.....
Bing me to your body so tight that if all those spells where corsets, I would shurely suffocate and fall to the ground dead.
Make me forever the willing or unwilling prisoner in your newly erected temple, devoted to our love.
Here I am Marius, draw your eyes open, hear my call, come take me away and set me free.
Save me from the devil in this frail mortal form....
Awaken me and save me from the nothing I have become.
A contest entry
- Take Some Points From Me by iamlost.
1070 points, ended May 1, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice poem love it good job on winning the contest too congrats..
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"I want you to make me beg to acquire the permission to speak your name."
Wow. Wow. Wow! This is amazing, your words are dark and beautiful, tantalizing throughout this piece, drawing me in and keeping me there. The phrasing and wording in every line is wonderful, I definitely love this deep vampiric write. Thanks for the entry.

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thanks alot
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