Thirty years moments
All behind you now
Every single memory
Crystal clear somehow
May years before always
Out number ones behind
Just keep making memories
One moment at a time......
Author notes
30 words
of course, the age (30 in this case) could be changed to whatever age you need for the person you are presenting this wish to...
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- 30 words by EeyoreUK.
300 points, ended May 15, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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This is cute and short and sweet!!!
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:] thanks for entering and good luck
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wow! this poem really is wonderful! it' short and sweet and simple yet to me oh so perfect!
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This was nice and short, I really liked it. Simple, yet it holds a good message. I liked this part best:
May years before always
Out number ones behind
Just keep making memories
One moment at a time......
Very true. Great work!
Good luck in the contest!
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Very good. This poem fits the category for the contest very well. Good luck in the contest!
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Helluva good 30 words. Glad to see some smiles in aging, have a couple clappies.
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Awesome!
I think it well fits into the category for the contest! Best of luck to you! Not many of us look forward to the years ahead, but we all can appreciate taking one moment at a time. Nice job! -
Awww, I love 'Moments' - they are what make our world!
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