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The sun on the horizon

slowly tiptoes across the meadows

and begins it's rise upon the day

to set hearts a light and dreams free

solitary moments being captured

under the brightness of a freshness anew

tiny rainbows spill light from left-over dew.

Tiny, little water pixies laugh as they bathe

in psychedelic kaleidoscope pools refracting

Many rays of sunlight into a beautiful prismatic rainbow

A lover sighs deep to diffuse in the hue-full ribbon

a vision of refracted dreams, desires.

The pride and prowess of all the god's empire

Within grasp of the eager, adventuring heart

Capturing the joy of yesterday's sorrow

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Capturing the joy of yesterday's sorrow

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  • XxunBeautifulxX
    May 1, 2008
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    oh my i love this so many emotions is so little words


  • 2lullabyhaven
    May 1, 2008

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    Sorrows surely can contain joy, just as the fiercest storm contains the spot of great calm in its centre.
    this is a great line good luck with it in the contest


    • abuyi
      May 1, 2008
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      thanks.. i wanted to be contrastic in my line.. as sun rises for one it sets for another
      best of luck to you too.. i realy like your idea