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it must be love

Endless nights sung in her dreams.
Endless prayers rung to my god.
What is this that unrest my heart?
What is this beauty?

Beauty that ignites my soul.
Beauty that my eyes can’t sway,
even when they are closed.
Beauty that addicts my thoughts.
Beauty that astonishes me,
even without 'presence'.

It must be love
that i am high without rum?
It must be love
that my lips search,
breast's that my head wanting to rest,
melody that my ears envy to hear?

It must be love
that is killing me with in.
It must be love
that is saving me with in.
It must be love
that i am breathing for.
It must be love
that i no longer care.

It must be love!!!

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  • Li snuffles
    May 3, 2008

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    woah!

    This was really beautiful.. i loved the repitition in it

    "beauty" of love.. is the message i recieved

    I really thought this was excellent work.. good luck in my contest..xxx