You make me wanna scream.
You make me wanna die.
You make me wanna cut.
You've made me hold onto the gun.
You've made me have a troubled mind.
Fake your life.
fake your choke.
fake your lies.
You've done it all.
You've killed them all.
You've tried it all.
You've made me pull the trigger.
You've made me kill this prisoner
Killing me it's all you ever do.
Killing life it's all we've ever done.
Suicide it's all there's left to do.
Yet suicide is like no other.
So here's to my dear Suicidals.
Author notes
Family sucks sometimes. x-x
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Bavo, Sarah. Very good.
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family does suck sometimes dont it momma
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this was really good, all your poetry is. i can realte..
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wow, amazing yet again hun, can relate to this poem xxx
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This is really good! I like the form. And the last line is a great ending!!
Great job!
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Wow, there are some really powerful and mixes up emotions coming through...^-^ , very nice...Lol
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