Life's tape
scrolls back
moments relived
scenes replayed
choices redone
in an instant
Fate alters
Destiny redecided
Life transformed
the movie projector
shoots a beam of light
into the changed existence
as one man plays omnipotent God
Instant rewind
Author notes
Option #19
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A little something for everyone :F by redhanded.
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Comments
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cool
great write
good luck -
hmmm
i really like your take o0n thsi prompt and how you relate life to kind of like a movie best of luck in the contest and in the future...
andi
(redhanded)
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All the best in my contest
A good poet with deep thoughts
All the best in my contest
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