Passion burns the flesh in scandalous seduction.
Wet trails without restriction coat in pruriency,
lovers of lustfulness need cry out within the night.
We are as we should be in nature, naked and in heat.
You are my audacious play time, and would not have it any other way.
A contest entry
- Adults come on in by Riftkin.
475 points, ended May 17, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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salacious in an excellent way
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Thank you for the comment.
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Audacious play time, indeed. We all are lustfully in heat. Our desires flowing freely, seeking satisfaction. Thanks for hot write, keep writing.
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audacious and salacious, enjoyed.
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I like to play with words and other things. Thank you for the comment. Always salacious!
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Can I cum & play too?
Hot desire fills my head reading this, short and sweet. Good luck in contest and thank you for your comment on my poem. -
Play time sounds very nice!!! Loved the heat in this write!!!
Az
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love the way you almost turn this into a game to play Riftkin
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loving your sensual pens
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OOOOhhhhhhhh
Very hot and tastefully sensual
Wish you the best in the contest!
Many blessings
David
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the magic of this scene definelty changed the course of my blood flow!!
Joe
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A very detailed piece full of great language and imagery. Very Erotic!
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Wow, this is steamy. Great use of vocabulary too, it doesnt take away from the read. Good luck!
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yeah, I seem to recall...
You were excellent at this! good hot and steamy stuff
Mrs. Pie!
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Hummmmmm and this pie is HOT!!!!!!! lol
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Hot!
"Wet trails without restriction..." Wow now thats hot.
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Well I know I am hot, so thank you very much lol.
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Ooh... lordie lordie
Heats goin' up... way up!
I love your ending:
"We are as we should be in nature, naked and in heat.
You are my audacious play time, and would not have it any other way."
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Thank you honey!
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