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Valley

Missing image
Crease of slope cuts path of colors bold
as landscape entwines around memories
priceless things unable to be sold
while azure above collaborates
with eternity's thoughts as they unfold 

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Photo taken by Barbara Mathews

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  • Tattboyspet
    May 5, 2008

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    damn! loved the opening thought!
    oh hell yea!!! Enjoyed this one tremendously!!!
    You've outdone yourself here my friend!


  • Kelli Marie
    May 3, 2008

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    A lovely write. Nicely penned. Your words go very well with the picture posted. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
    Kelli


  • Malabu
    May 2, 2008

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    I like the priceless things unable to be sold...this alone is a picture of nature in my mind...love the picture you paint and the wonderful way you express it here...


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    Wow... absolutely stunning! This took my breath away!

  • Sunshine Princess
    May 1, 2008
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    This is very pretty uncle Mark I love you


  • frownsnfreckles
    May 1, 2008

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    I wasn't sure what to do with the imagery until I saw the picture and realised you have captured it beautifully!

    'Crease of slope cuts path of colors bold'

    Good luck in the contest and well done


  • movedon
    May 1, 2008
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    A beautiful poem you have here. Full of solid images. I loved it

    Hugs to you,
    Miley


  • jcat gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    WOW!!! I have to say that this was just stunning!! Every word was just absolute perfection and it took me there within! Outstanding and best of luck

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