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Rustic rainbows strewn upon the ascending slopes

stroking serenity with streaks of gold and lavender

beneath the soothing turquoise canvas.

 

Finding a hug of Mother Earth's bounty in beauty

while stopping and letting the eyes trace the seconds

with a quill of awe

over how nature's artist in silent splendor

paints the soul the hues of rapture.

 

Scents of blooms intoxicate in calming magic

before feet descend to stroll the path

where the two faces of the hills meet.

 

And stroll in the hearth of scenic bliss

where the heart gets lost

in the mantle of vibrant array,

for awhile becoming apart the mesmerizing bouquet.

 

Mind slipping into the rut of memories

from the concrete citadels

possessing a life's decor with such cold outlines,

happy to find a respite of tender moments

amid places that let one feel

life become its own paradise

when inhaling the spell of pure unblemished beauty.

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  • Truetome
    May 14, 2008
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    romance is in the air here in this poem, enjoyed reading ~ spectacular.


  • Kelli Marie
    May 3, 2008

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    Your write is pure unblemished beauty as well. Very well written. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Kelli


  • Malabu
    May 2, 2008

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    however do you find the words to blossom your thoughts such as this wonderment...lovely poem with lovely scenes and lucid images...yow~


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    Absolutely Beautiful picture---Beautiful and your words do it justice---Best of luck to you in the contest!