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Blown away

Suspended

floating
in womblike trance

I breathe
in
out

my rage
my pain
my fear

solitary exclusion
from the source

of pristine sadness

isolating its center
knowing nothing

but emptinesss

of uncertain emotions

I transcend

and become
once again

childlike



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  • SuicidalLover
    May 2, 2008

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    OH....angry. Wow. This is well penned on holding it in. I mean you could've gone so much deeper! Amazing. Thanks for entering.
    ~Kystal Angel