I want her back
Altzheimer's taken her away
I want her back
Our love life once more back on track
Our little games again to play
With happiness to make each day
I want her back
In a list
A contest entry
- What Do You Want? by violetrose.
630 points, ended May 15, 2008, 37 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is an impressive piece. In a few short lines you were able to convey a very personal and emotional message. It has a deep sadness to it, but with a touch of happy memories peeking out. This is a tough thing to want, and I appreciate your entry in the contest.
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