Movement
through
time and space
lithe beauty
motion of poetry
imbued with grace
balletic form
in the ideal
spinning, gyrating
leaping
flowing
living, moving
in the now
freely
jumping
into the being
of reality's arms
caught safely
in God's embrace
A contest entry
- Lift my Spirits by aboomer.
525 points, ended May 6, 2008, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF Photo Prompt by Freestyle Bushido.
450 points, ended May 3, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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wow like this alot!, has sorta metaphysical feel to it. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thank you for kind comment
I appreciate that you took the time to recognize this.
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Lovely, soft feel to this - and great ending! I like the feeling of movement through your usage of the ballet moves.
Nicely done
thank you for this entry
best wishes
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Thank you for the HM
Judgin takes time and effort. Thank you for the chance to participate. The concept intrigued me. -
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thank you for the lovely entry!
(Yes, it took quite awhile reading and re-reading, etc...lol...)
best wishes
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Very soft flow and beautiful meaning...lovely imagery and metaphor...very spiritual uplifting...
Nicely done...
Best to you!
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