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Suicide

Cold water and frozen air,
icicles forming in my hair.
Why should I care?
I’m downing myself,
in this clear little pond.
I can’t continue on.
Nobody loves me anymore,
I’m just a skanky little whore.
Living afterlife,
for evermore

Author notes

Why should I care? - quote
Picture - http://www.deviantart.com/print/1204567/
"Displaced" by `larafairie
40 words

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  • SuicidalLover
    May 2, 2008
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    Yes, this is dark. Thanks for entering.
    ~Kystal Angel


  • S a r a h 4 5
    May 1, 2008
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    this was really good!
    my kind of writing! lol. i loved it!


  • Mistress Masquerade
    May 1, 2008

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    wow. this sure paints a clear picture, one i prefer to the one linkied below. great word use and flow. kudos!