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Goodbye

In the twilight of your life
Only then did I begin to know
A brain developed at thirty
Epiphany begins to flow

Your wisdom starts to shine
A growing star in my mind
Memories are all I have now
You have left me behind

I knew your anger
I felt your love
I grew to a man
In your shadow cast from above

Though you have gone
Cast away your pain
I'll keep you in my heart
Everything the same

These are the last tears for you that I shall shed
I let you go with all my love
I will keep the laghter
I hope to make you proud as you watch from above

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  • Kleroo
    June 8, 2008

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    The journey we have to take to say goodbye is not always easy but I like it when you said I'll keep you in my heart everything the same Great Write but sorry if it was about someone special


  • Summer Dawn
    May 3, 2008
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    sorry to hear about your dad. his is a very good poem of good bye


    • loneArt
      May 3, 2008
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      Thank you. His pain is no more and mine will pass.


  • Terri Norris silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    Nicely penned my friend. Simple, humble...what a great tribute, what a wonderful goodbye...
    God Bless you my friend...My heart fells your loss,
    Always,
    Terri.

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