Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Life and Death.

Freeze for a moment,
Stop the world,
Until I know why,
I have been hurled,
Into this thing you call,
Life. Life. Life,
Is life the cycle?
Or just the knife?
Is it death in disguise?
Well they seem to work,
Well together,
They always lurk,
Behind your back,
One conquering your present,
And your past,
One dealing with your future,
They’ll get you pretty fast.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • DarkLotus4Life.
    May 18, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Great write I really liked this piece


  • Hate-And-Pain
    May 1, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    I love your work, all of it hits home for me. It always makes me think and wonder about my own life of self harm. Great piece, dark, yet beautiful.