I am like a ship without a compass
With only fog that hides the day
And the darkness of the night
With no sextant for the stars
No way to find home
No home to go to
I live to find a way back
Back to port
Back to you
Please tell me what you think
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it always seems longer getting back.
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this is a really lost person, like you just have to have this person and yet can't figure out how to make it work with them, love the images you create.
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creates a great pic. awesome words, "I am like a ship without a compass, with only fog that hides the day." great job!
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paits a clear picture in your mine
great write
love always
erica
xx
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i hope you find your way home it sounds that your missing whatevers there alot
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Good visualization blah that was a pain to type haha anyways good job!
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life
Often a journey that establishes a happy ending. Going back to here seems that right thing I belive. Hope springs eternal.
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The despair of loneliness well penned. Mkaking life directionless and seemingly "homeless" .Good job here ell done
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I really like this one Eyec. It has such feeling.
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I can visualize this really well, and I really like it. I hope that you find your way back home soon though. My favorite part is:
"No way to find home
No home to go to
I live to find a way back
Back to port
Back to you"
Astonishing write.
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