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unravelling





i am moved, lightly
like dust settling over hair,

like the scent of peonies, heavy
clinging to curtains with long-legged
insistence

later i will hold your hand
marvel at the bones
under thin skin

know what i
have been

becoming

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  • LionSwanLover
    September 24, 2008

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    Lovely. This poem is so intimate and "quiet" one feels almost compelled to whisper it. You've captured the anticipation and maternal thrill with grace and beauty. Wonderful read.


  • Jettison
    May 2, 2008

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    so soon.

    i can't wait for her to be a teenager and finally be at the right age for you to show her all of these.


    • philosphyofkate
      May 4, 2008
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      i know. the thought of all the poems that will come between now and then is very exciting too. the ways we are loved and love each other...


  • tara wilson gold member
    May 1, 2008

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    aww....sigh...this is beautiful & delicate, like a baby blanket...

    (when I first started writing here, I wrote a really BAD.. lmao.. poem about nursing...damn, I should have not deleted it...it had a few good parts..you might have enjoyed it.)

    I bet you are getting nervous & excited all at the same time.....

    • philosphyofkate
      May 2, 2008
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      haha. i think i'm nesting.


      • tara wilson gold member
        May 2, 2008
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        oh - yes...I think I went through that whole 'nesting' stage..lol! About the last month of pregnancy..my house was so spotless..lol!

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