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Isn't it amazing

Isn't it amazing how the slightest
or simplest touch can make you feel?
Or how fast your heart races
When your significant other gently
Brushes the tip of their fingers
against your skin?

Isn't it amazing how much
A child can move the most
cold hearted person
With just their words?

Isn't it amazing what people 
do when they have so much
hate For a single person?
How far they would go
to get them out of
their mind and make
them disappear?

Isn't it amazing how strong
a single human being
can do? How hate can
take over a persons
mind and body and
control them?

Isn't it amazing
how just the
simplest plead
for help
or mercy
can
change
every
thing?

Isn't
IT
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  • Rovingone gold member
    June 14, 2008

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    Isn't it though. You covered a lot of bases with this one. Very good piece of writing. I'm glad I found one a bit more up beat. You certainly are a fine writer.


  • PerVirtuous
    May 8, 2008
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    Nice.


  • Elavina
    May 1, 2008

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    Whoa!

    This is amazing. Love your thoughts here. great write. Your getting better in your writing with every poem. Great job! I look forward to more.