Eyes trace your jaw line
and your perfect little ribs
Slender arms with my symbols upon them
Dark eyes that show all emotions
Your dark hair which frames your face
Is as alluring as it's always been
and your feelings will never change
That is why your beauty shines throughout everything else
With your long fingers
that brush my eager lips...
Author notes
Another Gabriel poem. For the same contest. b
A contest entry
- So they say... Beauty is all that counts... by Perception.
550 points, ended May 9, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oh... Nice... Beautiful...
I like the simple descriptions to it.
Best of luck in the contest, and thanks for entering
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Heh, I won't say much about this one, except that I envy the guy you're writing this for. Beautiful and simple as just that.
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Haha, Thank You. I'm very lucky...
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