Purity of air and water
Strength of sky and sea
Held between both I wait… for the peace of oblivion
Why should I care while waiting to be passed unto my sweet oblivion.
Tears... Breath...
Given for life before my end.
A contest entry
- Blow Me! by SuicidalLover.
600 points, ended May 2, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I guess I never thought of oblivion as sweet. I like this. I really made me think
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Hidden meanings
I think the best books, songs, and poems are the ones that make you think. They make you look for the hidden meaning. I try to be expressive but I like to draw out what people already feel, think, and understand. Thanx for the comment!
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i like this ithink its beautiful but sad
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Beauty in all things
Yes, I often find that even though something looks dark and desolate there is a beauty to it. Thank you for your comment I appreciate it.
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Vanessa!
It's my sester! I'm so happy you entered my contest! This is deep! Thank you for entering!
~Kystal Angel
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