Be kind, Rewind.
Let's do it over again.
Stop. Pause. Play. Pause.
Let's do it over again.
No regrets? No aspirations?
Let's do it over again.
Play Back, Pay Back.
Let's do it over again.
Analogue, tapes, cassettes, VHS.
Let's do it over again.
Back in time. Back to black.
Let's do it over again.
Sinking into repetition.
Let's do it over again.
Again.
Author notes
Not much thought in this. DOn't think I like it. Not sure
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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Almost a song sequence is created with powerful words flowing in a high pace.
All the best in my contes
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