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I have a dream

i have a dream
and in this dream
we are all the same
a dream of no differences
where we are all equal
there is no killing
because of my colour
and not because of my gender
I have adream
and one day
it will come to life

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  • Pisces rainbow
    May 14
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    you almost made me cry. God do we need more of you in the world. you are sweet and so aware of injustice.

    you have touched my heart sweetie.

    God bless...


  • Emotions Muse
    May 1
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    Good job here girlie! don't forget the space between a and dream on the 9th line. I like it and the overall message of tollerance is wonderful. GO you 10 points <3 em