with you im me
im happy and sweet
life is all to clear when ever your near
i want you in so many way but when ever i look you arent there
hmmm what to do what to do i guess ill have to come and find you
A contest entry
- So they say... Beauty is all that counts... by Perception.
550 points, ended May 9, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
to luke! i love you
Comments
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Very simple and sweet
Wonderful job,
best of luck in the contest and
thanks for entering
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lol i guess this ones for luke or somebody else not me of course cause remember you dont love me
right
amanda i love you more than anyone should be able to love another
i try so hard to get you to understand that
and to understand that i will always do this but you have to give me time to fix my mistakes \
but you dont want to give me time
but if you love me you would
if you love me you would forgive me of my mistake i made the other night and come back to me
i love you and i forgave you MANY times before but it seems we dont have the same views cause once i mess up its over for me
and i seem to be the only one trying to make our relationship work and i cant see why
thank you for sharing
keep up the great work
KITTY -
I like the way it goes out into a triangle.
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