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Though Shadows Come

Though shadows come

or tears fall like rain

we know the sun will still shine again,

our hearts will feel its warmth and light,

let the rays touch the places

of sorrow's marrow.

 

When loss and sadness

comes in storms,

love still is the flame that never dies

it glows after the sunset of our wishes,

shines in the darkness of our questions.

 

Because the heart is a garden

having flowers that thrive in hope's soil,

able to bloom as long as we keep trying

with the help of those who have care's tools.

 

Knowing we are never alone,

our weeds are those others have sense,

able to walk with you for a while

and share the many seasons of one's life.

 

So we hold out the bouquet of compassion's rose

that you might be refreshed by its perfume,

finding strength and healing

from the petals

shared from ones

who've also wander through winter,

and want to give you a poetic hug

to carry you  from snow to spring.

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A simple wish extended that you find peace in your times of valleys.

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  • aboomer silver member
    May 2, 2008

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    Beautiful! I love the wording in this - and especially thank you for the last stanza! This brought tears to my eyes - thank you.
    best wishes


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    Well Penned--Enjoyed Last Stanza in Particular--



    "So we hold out the bouquet of compassion's rose
    that you might be refreshed by its perfume,
    finding strength and healing
    from the petals
    shared from ones
    who've also wander through winter,
    and want to give you a poetic hug
    to carry you from snow to spring."

    This is magnificent!!
    Well Done---All the best to you in the contest!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    May 1, 2008

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    How very beautiful, hopeful, and encouraging!
    A fine piece this is, my friend!
    Love, light, and happiness to you!