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special friend.

All I ever wanted
Was a friend
Not just any friend
A special friend

You were more than
A friend to me
You just had to blow it
With a mouthful of lies

Since then you've become
Nothing to me
Just another person on
My list to ignore

All I ever wanted
Was a friend
Not just any friend
A special friend

I couldn't trust you
With my words
For you would just
Tell me off

I couldn't trust you
With myself
I knew you would
Hurt it

All I ever wanted
Was a friend
Not just any friend
A special friend

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  • hardwire
    May 10, 2008

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    i can relate

    i'm looking for someone, only problem is that i have no idea who that person is. but it better be someone who likes me for me.

    awesome write!!!

    hardwire
    XOXOXO


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 4, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    I think it's what we all want at some point in our life. And once that trust is broken, it seems ever harder to be able to trust again.

    I can feel the emotion packed into this. The repetition adds emphasis.

    Keep writing your words.
    Storm