If only I’d done what I said I would do
If only I’d said we could start life anew
And when we finally said good bye
If only we’d kissed when you started to cry
If only I’d said what you already knew
We were made for each other
From the start I’ve loved you
And if one day we had to part
I’d always have a place for you in my heart
Author notes
Past relationship
A contest entry
- Love Turned Bitter by MrsJones.
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beaitiful poem . thank you for entering
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Beautiful, touching and emotional piece. Well written and just proves that we need to smell the roses while they bloom.
Blessings my friend,
Ron
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I really like the rhyming in this, even though it's pretty vague.
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I love this piece. It is filled with emotion yet beautifully penned. Believe it or not, some people have a lot of trouble with that, lol. Good luck.
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Thank you for your heartfelt entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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good job
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wow this almost made me cry. It touched me. I have felt this way before regretting how once i let the one i love go away from me. And only if I had a chance to tell him how i feel. I hope you get the chance to do that to the one you love trust me you will regret it.
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this was beautiful. i really liked the simplicity of the regret in this poem. i'm not sure how that relates to true love waiting, but overall a beautiful piece. one line just flowed into the next, and i loved the rhythm in this. thank you for entering!!
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please include what option you chose.
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Short, simple, and very sweet. It flows well and gets your feelings across to your reader. I enjoyed reading it, it was refreshing :-) Thanks for entering!
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That's okay. You don't talk too much about mushy.
I like this poem. The 4th line isn't my favorite... (Because I don't like mushy...) But it was good.
-Hates Mushy Poetry
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