Ah oh ah, to be inebriated
Yee haw la intoxicated
Now I try to be serious indeed,
pontificate upon men's greed
puffed up and pompous preposteroushly,
or wax poetic, lobbing lovesick prose
like some kinda creepy cupid on the court
but deep down thasnot me, I just gotta need
to cover my insecurity
and I swear I'll try to resist having a sip
'a this lorverly, hic, slurp, nip, some'ere down the line
but for just right now this minute, I ain't gonna quit it.
the courage it's granted brings a smashingly free feeling
that I can be
just
me
Author notes
Well now, I loved this contest idea,Ace's express desire for us all to lighten up and as I'm so well versed in the excesses inherent in abusing substances I thought it tailor made..for those of you who don't know me I'm kidding..er kinda.
A contest entry
- How drunk are you? by Ace13.
550 points, ended May 8, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Girl, I am loving your style. I don't know what else to say.
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im having a lot of fun on ur page. Im really inspired. U are a very talented writer/poet.
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Airee!! And I loved the slang and slur interjected in this piece. Well done!!
John
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Lurve tha gradual build up...or is that down... to a good reasoning finale!
Well penned from me to me
or is that me to you????hic...who cares!!! Cheers and best of luck 
Linda
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LOL! Oh this is brilliant! HAHAHAHA! Best of luck in the contest dear.
Love and peace always,
mj.
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Thanksh alot Sugar!
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Can't be sober on the inside all the time will drive you to really drink, i think... anyway...enjoyed this...PK
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Dearest Poetess, this poetic ode to excess of liquid libation made me smile! Yesh, thish ish shmashing!
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Hahaha, loved it. Very creative and imaginative. And i am all about creativity. I like the note too. You got exactly what i meant. Well i enjoyed this and you seem pretty drunk here but we'll see if anyone else can seem to be drunker
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