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Dawns in the Shadows

cast by dawn
the shadow limps
with stealthy tread,
and behind steadfast stride
future staggers 
unnoticed
as life speeds
like rise of sun
bringing destiny
to them both


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  • crimsondew
    May 3, 2008

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    Wonderful!

    Lovely take on the prompt...brought together dawn and shadows well and beautifully...Congrats on the HM!


  • penman gold member
    May 2, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.