Oh God
I am soloing the euphonies
with shriek of my fissures
themes of grins
concerts of marvels
and the songs of creation
I am only an actor
conducting my lips movements
you are the playback singer
serenading all the songs for me
remaining in the background
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Quickie--Word prompt by Purush.
450 points, ended May 5, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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There is nothing like the sound of Praise! Amazing write
"I am only an actor
conducting my lips movements
you are the playback singer
serenading all the songs for me
remaining in the background"
~AmBeR~
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I liked this. It reminds me of the time I had to sing my first solo for some particular reason, I was terrified. nice write
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This is a classic poem, with a great start:
I am soloing the euphonies
with shriek of my fissures
themes of grins
concerts of marvels
and the songs of creation
You are capable of evoking very sophisticated thoughts and ideas in the simplest manner. I wish I could analyse this poem like a true admirer of melodies, but one could only end up praising it for the obvious reason that it truly touches the heart.I just wish to say that this transcends the literary traditions to communicate straight with the hearts.
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All the best in my contest
Beautiful imagery .well done
All the best in my contest.A philosophical twist to the context
"I am only an actor
conducting my lips movements
as you are the playback singer
serenading all the songs for me"
Oh God...
thank you
All the best in my contest
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