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Ociffer

Ociffer i not drwnk.
Cause i rony had 7 years.
I not drwnk caz i hav drwnk ummm.
Fruck hairs two of you.
Fwuck i sost my leer.
Eat umm do ya ave a pare.
Realrly ocffier i not drwnk hi r you alz the way ozer yhere.

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happy ace cause this poem sucks and yeah i tried

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  • aniqua
    February 26
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    very funny


  • Tercil gold member
    May 5, 2008

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    Thins is excellent, especially the dwunk / dwink. You have a sense of humour, and much of it, good shape to the read. great!


  • hollowriver
    May 2, 2008

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    lol that was quite enjoyable to read
    i have to laugh at it though, but that is obviously the point


  • Decorus Somnium
    May 2, 2008

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    Hahahaha...you drunky! That was a funny poem...and the contest says: "How drunk are you?" I say: VERY DRUNK!


  • Ace13
    May 1, 2008

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    Loved everything except the ending because it is not origional. I do love everything else though. It is very funny hahaha!! Well good luck

  • nirmal
    May 1, 2008
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    doog

    du are yeally trunk merry vuch

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